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"You like him, don't you?"

"Woah, where the heck did you come from?"

"You'd think that you'd be used to that by now."

"You'd think."

"You didn't answer my question."

"Yeah, I was planning on distracting you to avoid it, and now I forgot what you said."

"Liar. But I'm repeating it anyways. You like him, don't you?"

"Who?"

"You know who."

"..."

"..."

"I don't like him, he's more like a brother."

"What if pigs flew?"

"What do pigs have to do with my feelings?"

"I don't know. What if he were the last man on Earth?"

"Are we playing the what if game?"

"What if we were?"

"..."

"..."

"Ok, that's a yes. If he were the last man on Earth, I wouldn't have much of a choice now, would I? But then again, man normally refers to human, and..."

"What if he loved you?"

"...Well, it wouldn't really matter, would it?"

"What if it did?"

"Are you implying something?"

"No, you're infering something."

"Stop using words, you're hurting my brain."

"Brain? What brain?"

"Don't push it."

"Well?"

"If he did, and it did matter...I...I don't know. Why are you asking me all these questions, anyways? Do you-"

"What if I loved you?"

"..."

"..."

"Are we still playing 'what if'?"
I can't believe how many people have enjoyed this :) Well, as a hopeless attempt to milk this for all it's worth, I made a second one, 'What If 2'! [link]

These two characters are from my story, The Time Portal. Needless to say that you don't really have to read it all too much to get what's going on, though I'm sure it *could* be a little confusing without the narration with it.

Enjoy :)
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:iconxxtoxicghostxx:
xXToxicGhostXx Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ugh, it's so good! :'D good job
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Aw, thanks!
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:iconxxtoxicghostxx:
xXToxicGhostXx Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's no problemo. You deserve it :)
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wolfie306 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Reminds me of Absurdism
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Teebs13 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Funny and a good piece of literature nice job :D
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Thank you so much :)
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:iconaru-08:
Aru-08 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
I mean, Love it ^///^
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
Haha either way, thank you ;)
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:iconaru-08:
Aru-08 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
OLVE It !
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Zandromina Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Hahaha, this is kinda funny, I love it :D
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
Awww, thanks :D
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:iconzandromina:
Zandromina Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
<3 I loved it ^^
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
I wish I could do the same for the second one, but it didn't turn out quite as witty and cute as this one did ;P
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:iconzandromina:
Zandromina Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Hey ya know, so long as you like it that's all that matters :D
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
Haha it's all right. One of these days when I'm feeling particularly witty I want to redo it. Until then, I'm happy with it for now.
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:iconzandromina:
Zandromina Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Hmm...Would you mind if I watched you? (I'm not a stalker I swear ;D)
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010
Yes. Yes I do. I don't like anyone watching me, I'm kinda a loner that way.

jk. Please do :) It makes me feel special when people watch me, like the art I post here isn't just for me to look at when I get bored sometime in the future :P
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jennycotoure Featured By Owner May 18, 2010
XD belive it sista, this is the shiz!!
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner May 20, 2010
Haha thanks :P I like shiz.
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:iconthe-seventh-sage:
The-Seventh-Sage Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010  Professional Writer
This is funny. I enjoyed it :).
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010
Thanks!
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The-Seventh-Sage Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010  Professional Writer
You're welcome.
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missgraciea Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2009  Student
I haven't read your story. But I think this is really funny and well written :heart:
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2009
Haha, thanks :) It was meant so you didn't have to read the story ;)
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:iconmissgraciea:
missgraciea Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009  Student
Good job it was or I would have been really confused ;)
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
lol well thanks, I appreciate it ^_^
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pinkemo156 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009
love this story, its an inspiration
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009
Aw, thanks!
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Broken-In-Love Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2009
cute! :hug:
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2009
Aw, thanks!
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emmiwish Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2009  Student Writer
Nnnniiiicccceee!!

Very creative.
I would sooo fave this, but my computer has gone wack and won't let me do anything... See my journal. :)

So. I'm theoretically faving this! ^^
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2009
lol alright ;)
Thanks for the theoretical fave! Never had one of those ;D
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emmiwish Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2009  Student Writer
lol. np!

it works now, i can fave again! -beams-
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2009
Haha, yay!
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emmiwish Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009  Student Writer
yeah, im thrillleddddd
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canticum Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
XD that is funny
and you suddenly got really popular!
or everyone decided to comment all at once.
did you get featured or something?
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fera-nai Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2009
No! It suddenly got popular. You know, I have no idea if I got featured. I only got 2,000 hits though, normally featured ppl get like 20,000 from hits...So I have no idea.
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canticum Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe someone with lotsa watchers just put you in their journal or something..
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009
They must have because if you go to the most specific category that it's in then you see it's towards the bottom of the first page. i was like, woah. i've never been on the first of anything in all deviant art til this submission. And I did it all while i was bored during english class!
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canticum Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
hahah, nice.
See? english is a useful class!
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
I know! Even if it is just for doing something else you aren't supposed to because you're bored!
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:iconcanticum:
canticum Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
XD just don't tell my english teacher
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2009
LOL of course not. I'm forever away from them anyways, and everyone knows I'm much too lazy.
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Dowa-chan Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2008
woaah i love this ~ :heart:
where can i read the time portal ? i have the sudden urge to do so because of this >.<
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fera-nai Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2008
Haha, it's in my gallery. I made a separate section for it - - But you know what? I'll make it easier for you:
[link]

This is the first chapter. There are links in the comments to the next one :)
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Tadpole2froggy Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
This confusess me brraaaiinnss
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2008
I'm sorry, haha. One of the bad things about having only dialogue.
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breathemusic Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
OH MY GOD! I love this! :love:
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:iconfera-nai:
fera-nai Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2008
Thanks :)
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mahal-moi Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
I know nothing about The Time Portal, but I love this ^^ It just amazed me and I love it -faves-
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